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Thursday, January 21, 2010

[NEWS]
I took Wednesday off of work and ended up not returning to the city until Friday. It was one hell of a bender. So the comic was a little late. Apologies. I managed to clean up enough on Sunday morning to get all caught up.
This episode introduces the eye of the Thunderpups. There's more than one eye, but they all function as one. All seeing and all that. I like the idea of a giant trophy that has multiple eyes that randomly blinks. I bet it makes a slimy slicsh sound as each eye individually blinks. Like sandpaper on wet asphalt. In every scene Gobeck is in there will be this "sllichk" sound. Anytime there's a pause in the conversation it should be broken up by this sick sound of unlidded eyes randomly blinking.
I just don't want to add the SFX everytime they eyes blink. That's alot of sound effects.

[vision impaired script]
Bohrah: Ohh! That's alot of blood. Good job.
Gobeck: Sadist.
Gobeck: Is that?.. o_o. o_x.. That's the eye of Rumdara? This is... I can't take this.
Bohrah: No, son. I'm proud of you. I want you to have it. It's my trophy and I want it to go to you. Just in case people don't take my "no" so lightly.
Gobeck: But.. I mean this is how everything started. I can't.... I'm unworthy.
Bohrah: Fuck. I'm going to leak from the eyes here. Take the fucking thing will you?
Gobeck: Dad. You aren't going to Die Tomorrow. You're a legendary Warrior. You're an Icon.
Gobeck: No Bureacrat would touch you. You single handed took the skull and this stone from the kings meat. You may have an office job but the whole planet-


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